Reviewer: Oscar Larsson

Paper by: Joshua brown

    There is a very arguable thesis and topic. The topic sentence is clear and it connects with the thesis very well. There is no visual analysis yet. There is one quote in the first paragraph, which does not make his paragraph a synthesis. He did not introduce the authors or his citations in the introduction. He has the correct format. I am unaware is he has two reading from the class but i'm sure he will find it. His sources are lacking but he has time to find them and use them in his paper. Otherwise i like how he used a very arguable theme and in class we talked about it alot giving him alot of pre work done and alot of background research already completed for him.