Reviewer: Joshua Brown

Paper by: Gesmine Akter

    Gesmine's thesis can be argued from different perspectives, it is well written. She has an adequate amount of sources and quotes in her essay, and wrote an introduction coupled with two body paragraphs. The second body paragraph appears to be incomplete, due to an unfinished sentence bringing an end to the essay; this can be revised in the her next draft. Additionally, the grammar isn't flawless but the essay in it's majority is well-composed. The paragraphs and heading in her essay are appropriately aligned.