Paper 3 by Oscar Lars, Reviewed By Davron Ochilov
The thesis of this essay is arguable and it is open ended. The introduction is constructed very well
because he uses background information on his topic (memes) and explains what they are. The author of
this essay uses topic sentences that connects back to his essay of ‘Memes can be an effective way to teach
the young students today through social media.’ The author of this essay needs to work on his synthesis
within paragraphs and he needs to make sure to use at least 2 different sources. The essay is correctly
formatted although, it should be double checked for spelling and grammar mistakes.
Overall, this draft is a good start to a research paper but it could use some work.
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